RaV Book Review: Magic on the Storm (Allie Beckstrom, Book 4) by Devon Monk
Matt | June 2, 2010 | 7:45 amReviewed by Matt
Disclosure: This novel was purchased by the reviewer’s own hard earned cash.
Introduction: Magic on the Storm is the fourth book in the Allie Beckstrom urban fantasy series.
Author’s bio: Devon Monk has one husband, two sons, and a dog named Mojo. She lives in Oregon and is surrounded by colorful and numerous family members who mostly live within dinner-calling distance of each other. When not writing, Devon is either knitting, remodeling the house-that-was-once-a-barn, or hosting a family celebration. Devon has sold over fifty short stories to fantasy, science fiction, horror, humor, and young adult magazines and anthologies. Her stories have been published in five countries and included in a Year’s Best Fantasy collection.
Dust jacket summary: “Magic stirred in me….I closed my eyes, wanting to lose myself to it. Wanting to use magic in every way I could. But that would be bad. I had enough magic inside me; I could burn down a city. And I didn’t want to do that….”
Allie Beckstrom knows better than most that when magic’s involved, you always pay. Whether the price is migraines, amnesia, or muscle aches, she is committed to her work as a Hound, tracing illegal spells back to their casters. But her job is about to get much more dangerous.
There’s a storm of apocalyptic force bearing down on Portland, and when it hits, all the magic in the area will turn unstable and destructive. To stop it from taking out the entire city, Allie and her lover, the mysterious Zayvion Jones, must work with the Authority–the enigmatic arbiters of all things magic–and make a stand against a magical wild storm that will obliterate all in its path.”
Thoughts & analysis: I am usually not a big fan of urban fantasy novels but Devon Monks’ Beckstrom series has been able to keep me enough entertained to follow the series and highly anticipate future volumes. That being said, the fourth installment, Magic on the Storm, is the weakest story so far.
To me, Magic on the Storm just seemed like long lead into the next novel, Magic at the Gate. One of the hallmarks of urban fantasy is that each novel is a self-contained story with a few series arcs that flow through each book. The first half of this is book was pretty much stagnant with the second half of Magic on the Storm picking up the pace but it ends in a serious cliff hanger that will lead directly into Magic at the Gate.
One of the elements that I have enjoyed in this series was that each novel built upon plot elements introduced in the previous books. But Magic on the Storm really stood pat in this area. Yes, we explore further the magical group known as The Authority and learn all about the pending war between the two factions but there is not really much new content that is introduced.
Ms. Monk does really hit the whole Soul Compliments plot thread pretty hard. It supposed to be extremely rare occurrence in this universe but is seems that every other person in this story has a Soul Compliment. Personally, I believe Ms. Monk has overplayed her hand with respect to Soul Compliments and now it has lost the uniqueness that it was supposed to represent.
Final verdict: Magic on the Storm felt like the filler episode of a really good TV series. The diehard fans will certainly enjoy it but the average viewer will be less enthralled. Since I lean more towards diehard fan, I enjoyed the novel but I just wish the book would have started about half-way through the story and then move forward. The story only really picks up and becomes interesting in the last quarter of the novel. But, I will be picking up Magic at the Gate because I just have to know how the story will end.
Author’s website: Devon Monk and Deadline Dames.
This is the third book in the Allie Beckstrom series by Devon Monk. I was very lukewarm on the first book, 

